Today I was learning we are learning how to add in what we saw into our writing
I enjoyed seeing the couch and sitting on it.
I enjoyed seeing the couch and sitting on it.
I found it challenging to finish within the time.
I found it challenging to finish within the time.
My digital learning object shows the writing I did about the horse truck
My digital learning object shows the writing I did about the horse truck
Next time I would change how much writing I do and add in more slides.
Next time I would change how much writing I do and add in more slides.
Kia ora Joshua,
ReplyDeleteI saw the horse truck parked outside the school and wondered who owned it and why it was at a school. Now I know! Thank you for sharing your writing.
I found it very hard to read your writing. Are you able to edit your slide and take the dark colouring away from your writing so we can read it? And if you made your font a bigger size it would make it even easier to read.
from Mrs Torrie
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ReplyDeleteYou have tried your best from William
ReplyDeletekia ora Joshua I really like how the background looks.
ReplyDeleteHave you tried a gift. you should try it.
It remind me of colour.
from India
Kia ora Josh
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jasmine and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I really liked your background.
I learned that you're not a big writer.
Maybe you could add some more writing in.
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